Peter Elbow is
the man! I love that we were introduced to him. His book Writing with Power helped me when it came to writing my personal
statement. As I mentioned before in one of my comments on Kinsey’s blog post I
always had trouble with writing my personal statement from previous years, but
this time it is different. Elbow is one of the factors that cause writing my
paper easily. I also think it’s the fact that teachers in previous years made
it seem like we have to write something drastic in the essay, like a family
member dying. The overall writing
process is easier now. From listening to the past presentations on Peter Elbow
the methods I would like to etch into my writing is free-writing, looping,
priming the pump, and writing without thinking. Not that all methods presented
aren’t helpful, but these certain methods I find more beneficial to my writing
process.
Another thing
that I want to mention is that I actually had an easier time writing my second
personal statement than my first one. I think it is my choice in prompts. I
honestly like the Common Application prompts more because it is easier to write
about the topics. I don’t know about you, but I found that the Common
Application prompts were straighter to the point causing me to have no trouble
sharing my feelings on paper. If you guys were wondering I wrote about the
second UC prompt and for the Common Application I wrote about a place where I
find myself to be perfectly content.
Now that we are
turning in our final essays, what have you learned from writing your personal
statement? Have you seen yourself progress as a writer? Did Peter Elbow help? Lastly
which was your favorite prompt to write about?
Christian, first of all, you are awesome. Other than that, Kalei helped me realize that I did have things to learn. This personal statement showed me that I am actually a pretty deep person. I'm not the happy, bubbly person everyone knows, but a smart, analytical, and grateful young person. I have seen myself progress as a writer because before Elbow's help on freewriting, I used to struggle a lot with all the thoughts in my head, not being able to get them out on my paper. Without it looking like word vomit of course. My favorite prompt was the one about the place that I am content in. My paper is actually pretty dang good, which is something I do not get to say freely much.
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